wo yaadon k tukde
Chupke se
raat ke aaghosh main
andhere main siye
mala si piroye
aankhon k raste
palkon pe sisakte hue
, fir hoton ne piye
wo sehem k bikhar jana mera
hathon main hath rakh
fir dekh muskurana tera
wo sannaton main goonjti
fir wahi ek awaaz
wo lafz ankahe
din ki chaka chaundh
main jo bayan na hoye
aur raat ki khamoshi
main ansuney reh gaye
A very evocative piece. Not a single extraneous word.
ReplyDeleteYou have captured a certain state of mind very well.
Someone very close to me once said 'your writing is evocative', glad to hear that again.
ReplyDeleteand thank you - when emotions bleed through ink , this happens and may be thats the reason why i have been able to capture it .